Final Dialogue
Mom’s aim: To show that she is angry and wants him to stop wasting money.
Dad’s aim : Try to explain why he went to drink and seek her understanding.
Ultimate aim: Show understanding towards each other.
Key rings…
Dad: Dear why are you not asleep? Have you eaten yet?
Mom: No, I am waiting for you since eight. You won’t even ring me a call when you are not coming back for dinner. I cooked so much for you.
Dad: You always complain…I already had a long day at work, can’t you give me a break?
Mom: That is because you are a big problem…
Dad: Sigh~ Why do you have to always have to start a fight? Do I look like your enemies?
Mom: you know that we are having problems coping the bills, and yet you went to drink?
Dad: Is there an offence to actually chill out with my friends? Is there anything wrong?
Mom: Do you think I will believe one of your random stories again? Do you think I will believe you again?
Dad: what?! What do you think you are talking about?
Dad: Have you being working for long hours and always working behind schedule? And your boss will always nag at you and being a pain in the ass? You know how it feels?
Mom: I just do not want to see you waste the money on drinking.
Mom: I just need you to spare a thought for our family, will you?
Dad: Sorry dear, I think I overworked in the office… Will you forgive me?
Mom: OF course not!
Dad: Can you warm up the dinner for me?
Mom: yes yes my honey!! Just go and bathe.
Mr Ryan: I cannot embbeded my dialogue here. I shall put the link here.
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December 14, 2007 at 9:13 pm
misterryan
Production values are good (who is that mom? She’s great!) You didn’t reach a point where you were offering us something fascinating with the material though. I liked to see the way the mother had a concern about the money, but it wasn’t clear if this was really important to her or not. She gave up on it so fast.