Alex and Ning just finish their dinner and they decided to take a seat by the side. They go for a walk and stop by the side, watching the scenery. Alex is well known for his romantic ways to woo girls because he comes from a rich family. With a twitch of his fingers, fire works begin to shoot right up to the sky. With a ending, it has a heart shape form on the beautiful dark sky.
Alex asks confidently, “Ning, do you like me?”
Ning reply, “Of course I do my dear. “
Alex stands up by grabbing Ning along too. He put his hand into his pocket and reaches out for his ten carats ring. Ning smile sweetly and stare at Alex.
Alex says “ will you marry me? “
Ning reply “ Yes yes I do!!”
Alex hugs Ning and he kisses her on the forehead.
He then put on the ring for Ning. They decide to stroll for a while more. Alex suggests Ning to come over to his house as his parents were aboard. Ning feels like she is over the moon and she just agree on anything that Alex says. Alex is also in good spirit and he celebrates by opening a 1972 red wine. He can’t stop drinking and soon he is drunk then fallen asleep. Ning starts to look at him and admiring his sleeping looks. Ning feels that he is rather cute. Alex then opens his eyes real wide and stares at Ning. Alex starts to kiss Ning. Ning feels so relax then Alex moves his hand around Ning’s neck. Alex starts to strangle as if he has gone mad. Ning struggles and look effortless at Alex. Alex then grabs her head and knock it against the corner of the table. Ning then stops moving and it is confirm that she is dead with eyes wide open. Alex mumble“ I love you. Mary, I really do. But why do you have to abandoned me? What have I done…” Alex goes back to sleep.
The next morning, Alex feels something thick was on his back of his head. He touches it and sees blood. He tilt his head and sees Ning on a pool of blood. To his horror he wonder who will did this? He then remember hs family disease he has the rare illness call the “ Drunk illusion violence disease.” Alex then realize doctor advise him not to drink till he gets drunk. The truth begins to slap his face real hard. He starts to feel guilty in his mind.
“oh lord, what have I done? I did not did It on purpose !!”
he starts to hold Ning in his arm and tears of regrets flows from his eyes. He whispers in the air
“Ning, I love you…I am sorry…”
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November 27, 2007 at 11:57 am
misterryan
Drunk illusion violent disease!!
I looked it up on wikipedia. There’s no such thing. This story is certainly bizarre, and I can see the ways you make your character rich and famous (and a bit of a playboy too). However, I’m not seeing the way it’s from his emotional flaw we reach our tragedy. It’s halfway there, but the journey to Greek tragedy is not yet complete.